onsdag 17 maj 2017

Electric cars are the future

Why electric cars should be more common. Electric cars are the future because electricity is a renewable energy. Electricity is good because it's made from water and wind power plants. 

Diesel and petrol pollute the air and destroy the ozone layer. The only use for diesel is to strög and pull heavy trailers. In china the people walk around with mask to not breath in all the bad air. 

Electric cars need to have a lot of batteries to drive long distances, and that isn't very good. But that will be better as time goes on since battery's become better every day. Charging the cars are very cheap because electric is cheap. 


Giving response:
The title is good and it says what he believes in the future. He also says what this text will be about in the first sentence.


Good title. Good arguments but there is only two of them. The counter arguments and the English is very good. Maybe you could expand your text and write more about introduction, background and finally summary. mvh 

fredag 12 maj 2017

Epa



The a tractors is causing high stress among fellow drivers. They drive slow and sound loud. The opinions and thoughts is very divided. Some want to raise the allowed speed and some want them out of our roads. 

They often leak oil and gas. They always tukt the epa on high rpm, and without mufflers or sometimes without any exhaust pipe at all you can hear them from the other side of the town.  And when they are revving so much the a-tractors consume a huge amount of gas. And also spit out very much exhausts which is really bad for the environment. 

The epa vehicles is very good and useful to teenagers who live far away from the city. They can feel like they are free and can drive whenever and wherever they want, especially in the winter.
It is also good for young people who is into cars. An epa is a great first car. You can learn a lot when you fix it and tune it or whatever, and it could be really fun too.

In a epa you are only allowed to have one passenger with you. Although not many care about this and often there is 4-5 kids in the vehicle. This can be dangerous cause they block the drivers sight and may disturb the driving when they are all thronged in the passenger seat.

Many of the drivers is unfortunately driving very reckless. This can cause big accidents. Even worse when the epa is able to drive faster than it should. Barely no one drives an a-tractor that is legal. The most usual is a 2pet single gearbox, and the worst ones drives with fully geared (5pet) which makes it go as fast as it would if it had been an real car.
To get the licence you do not have to show your driving skills. You can get the licence while never been behind a steering wheel. And the moment after you can practically be driving a 120mph car. It can cause horrible accidents because of the lack of control and that they do not care about traffic laws.
In the winter it gets even worse. The old rear wheel drive Volvos skid around on our roads with a 15 year old behind the wheel, and the accidents is a fact.

By removing and disallow all a-tractors we can avoid accidents and be free from the noise and smell from them. Also we avoid the stress when you get behind an epa that drives in 18mph on your way to or home from work.